1 Sep 09, 07:03
jade sparrow.I LOVE JACK!: I love this story it is amazing WOOOO3 Dec 08, 16:10
Guru34: I hope the 3rd comes soon Jack and Fhera would be great in Worlds End !30 Nov 08, 15:22
K.A.D: hope you make a 3rd awesome!30 Nov 08, 14:28
tiggress701: hey!! that was a great story but when is part 3 coming ive been waiting forever!!!!!! please make it soon!15 Jul 08, 21:40
animelover: Hey This is the best story eva!!!! Plz tell me your doing the 3rd too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 Jun 08, 17:58
JaCkSpArRoWgUrL4eVeR: lol he gots my vote hands down 
15 Apr 08, 13:16
kat: YES! JACK FOR PRESIDENT! 
29 Mar 08, 21:03
NightmareCandyxx: sweet story ^-^, ur one of mah losers now, meaning ppl who I think are cool 
lol, anyway, sweetness, keep up the AWSOME work ^-~24 Mar 08, 14:47
nital: and cruel24 Mar 08, 14:47
nital: hahah thanks guys! of course there'll be a part three. how could i ljust leave it..that would be evil haha1 Mar 08, 18:49
A.Darker.Dream: 
1 Mar 08, 18:48
A.Darker.Dream: ohmygoshness!! luved the story chica!! please make a part three, (since there is one ^.^) lol, well anway!! luved the story ~.^27 Feb 08, 05:27
aizel: absolutely love the ending..hehe..hope there's a part three out there..21 Jan 08, 08:39
nital: hahah thanks sheeta! *hgs sheeta*21 Jan 08, 03:41
Sheeta: Well...Except for the fact that they got eaten...21 Jan 08, 03:41
Sheeta: WEEEEE ^^ *tackle-hugs Nital* What a great ending!20 Oct 07, 18:21
nital: haha thanks Sheeta. I promise it'll be better next time though, and hmm...I think she might just get to punch liz in the next chapter20 Oct 07, 18:21
nital: thanks sofie =)19 Oct 07, 09:34
Sheeta: And WHY didn't she punch Lizzy while she had the chance?? Don't be so har d on yourself it was a good update!18 Oct 07, 08:57
Sofie: Lovely update <33