24 Sep 09, 12:11
KcA: very nicely done. This is by far myfavorite chapter yet ^^7 Jan 09, 05:11
ShiroFlower2: 
7 Jan 09, 05:10
ShiroFlower2: oh and nice choice fo pics^^7 Jan 09, 05:10
ShiroFlower2: You Need To Make More Stories Yours are good12 Aug 08, 21:10
maya: nice verry nice1 Jun 08, 05:13
xXlvingdeadxX: 1 Jun 08, 05:13
xXlvingdeadxX: want more more MORE.................please:)31 May 08, 21:01
xXlvingdeadxX: like more please.and don't be like some writers that rifht so much then stop it writing the story.cause i mean who puts out say a book but it only has half the story or just the frist chapter25 May 08, 07:12
albina: cool1 May 08, 14:56
Narutolover: I loved it! it wasfunny and great! Update it plz!24 Mar 08, 22:20
Kristen-Chan: i love the story plz update soon.14 Feb 08, 23:21
Chris: I know D: Id idn't want to him to die, but it was the only wayyyy10 Feb 08, 12:02
Kaye: YAY!! Update!!! It's was good, but Takai died =[ Oh well, next one soon please! <322 Dec 07, 17:41
Chris: (and happy holidays with all that commercial goodnes)22 Dec 07, 17:41
Chris: homigod its finally out! Hope you guys enjoyed it!20 Oct 07, 11:43
Ferris: unbelievable video http://themymoviessite.com/movie/white/0/13/557/3/30 Sep 07, 17:18
xXVampireBloodXx: awesomeful chapter. ^.^30 Sep 07, 12:05
Chris: Next chapter will be out today, sorry for the delay25 Sep 07, 17:10
xXVampireBloodXx: Dude, so freaking awesome. Wsrite more soon.22 Sep 07, 15:42
Kat: get the next chapter out soon.